Tempests of the world,
Frothing within me.
The sting of a thousand comebacks,
Bubbling, to be set free.
Yet when I look at you,
A false lull reigns over.
I’m chained to your promises,
Of an elusive ‘forever’.
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Great work Pradita. I liked her eyes a lot. Feels as if she is hiding a lot of pain within them!
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Thanks a lot Radhika 🙂
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Amazing work. Loved it. 🙂
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Thanks Sheetal 🙂
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My pleasure. 🙂
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This is beautiful . The face reflects pain as well as relief at the same time .
The eyes are deep
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Thanks a lot Charvi 😘😊
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Nice one Pradita. You wield the brush and the pen to bring out beautiful strokes with a splash of color.
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Thank you so much Sir 😊 😊
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I love the eyebrows..I’m chained to your promises, of an elusive forever. Your painting and writing complement each other.
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Thank you so much 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Very beautiful……amazing.
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Thank you Sir 😊
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Amazing art work
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Thank you 🙂
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Di your lines are not so visible
It could be better if you copy those below .
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Lol! I thought so. Thanks for telling me 🙂
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As u know I do speak whatever in my mind .
I believe in honesty 😀
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No problems 🙂
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🙏🙏
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The painting and the writing; a perfectly harmonious blend!
Babe..her eyes! Those eyes are captivating! 👌
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Thanks a lot Gurl. Coming from you, knowing how well you paint yourself, that’s quite something 🙂
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Damn good!! We do get chained to fake promises… And it is very difficult to forget those things and move on. I can totally relate.
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Thanks a lot for tour words and the follow. I’ll reciprocate ASAP. Thanks again and welcome to this world 😊😊😀😊
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