Please,
Erase me,
Efface me,
Consign me to the past,
Brand me an outcast.
Tell me I’m dumb.
Tell me I’m easy.
Hurt me,
Curse me,
Shut me out,
Laugh me off.
But gimme a sec,
Hear me out,
Before you say ‘never’,
Coz you were my ‘forever’.
Farewell lover,
You’re the best of my errors.
The Pradita Chronicles 
So very well said.
The last line just captured me.
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Thanks Moushmi. How have you been?
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I have been great. Just a little occupied.
How about you?
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Great and the rest the same as you 😁😁
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I understand how it gets sometimes.
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Bah…durdanto…liked it…the poem gives a sense of anger in subdued yet prominent manner
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Thanks Sangbad but what does durdanto mean?
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oops…it Bengali term for near to English word excellent…
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Consign me to the past . Brand me an outcast – this was so mesmerizing . I loved the way you framed it so perfectly . Keep writing . Cheers !
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Thanks a lot for the words and the follow 😊 😊
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Anytime!
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That was beautifully expressed!
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Thank you so much Dahlia ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
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Love this!
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Thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊
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Best of my errors …loved this! 🙂
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Thanks a lot 😊 😊
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You are welcome 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Thanks Yuhu,, 😊😊
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So beautifully expressed… especially the last line
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Thanks gurl 😊 😊 😊
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Too good!👌Yo Pradita🤘
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Thanks a lot Sanjay. How have you been?
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Fine thank you pradita!busy in reading philosophy books!
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Oh! Wow…. You’re quite a reader then. I would never dare to touch them 😧
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Ack, that poem hurt! So so sad. ❤
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Thanks a lot 😊 😊 💞
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Best of my errors., loved that combination…
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Thanks a lot Akhila 😊😊😊
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Best of my errors…last line..nailed it…
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Thanks a lot. You always praise my work to the moon 🙂
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I m really very inspired by ur work n I realy love the name of ur blog…dats y in free tyms I read only selected works n urs z one among dm
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Awww! Thanks so much. Yet again, you praise me to the moon, and it feels good there 😉 😀
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Yeah welcome
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Just posted smthng…hope to hear good frm u
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Why this sudden outburst of self pity?
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Sir, please don’t be alarmed. This is only from my head onto paper,.a figment of my imagination, of how one who’s been abandoned must feel like someone who she still loves. Hope you liked it though and thank you for the concern 😊
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Yes. I felt alarmed. That is proof of your real success as a vivid and impressive writer.
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Aaaah! That made my day. Thank you so so much Sir 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
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What I told you was true.
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I know that, Sir. Hence the thanks. Thank you yet again 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Imaginations !??
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yes, yes. Please don’t think this is my own experience. You’re the second one to ask me that 😀
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I knew that’s why I was asking 😀😀
I would like to say
Horror imagination
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Lol… Achha btw, I’ve added your blog to my blogroll. Just go to this link https://thepraditachronicles.com/home/ and scroll all the way down and then look right to the title – Blogs I like.
Cheers 🙂
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Hehehe
So sweet of u di
Thank you so much !
Nowdays I am super confused !!
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Don’t worry. I time of clarity will come for you too. It’s called marriage and bachhe
😛
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😂😂😂Mera mtlb vo Ni tha un chijon SE kbi confuse Ni HOTA Mai
Meri confusion ye h
Exams SE Jada Mai websites , webhosting WordPress plugin ye sb search kr RHA hu
AB do hi raste Hai mere paas
Abhi mjhe exam k turant Baad plan purchase KRNa h Aur blog move krna h ya fir vha nya blog technical tutorials SE related bnana Hai
Please give me suggestions what should I do
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Yar iska mere paas jawab nahi. Technology se related mujh se kuch mat poocho. Go official with whichever site you think will do better. Dusri ko sirf timepass ke liye rkho
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Technology isliye kuki vo Mera field h Aur dusra m kafi jyada online time waste krta hu aisi chijon m isse achha m vo sari knowledge Sath ki Sath blog m likhu Taki baki logon ko easily ek jgh mil jaye conclusion pdhne ko
Sath m Meri knowledge bhi wide hogi
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To phir banao tech base blog. But wait till exams are over
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Haan 😂😂
M soch RHA Tha agr m mix-up Kru to khichdi bn jayegi h na??
Alag KRNa Sahi rhega ya phirr ye b combined isi m tech tadka
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No no dont mix it up. Separate blogs will be better
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To ise free wale haal p chhod dun 😁😁😁
Hindi contribution !
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Yes. I told you, concentrate and invest in whichever blog does better.
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Stats ke point of view SE to usi type k blogs p life long views ate Hai
Baki internal satisfaction to Hindi writing SE hi milti Hai 😁😁
PTA Ni AB m kya krunga
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Bhai mere, dono blogs rakho lekin paisa aur time usi pe lagao jisse munafa zyada ho. Man ki tripti ke liye tum kabhi bhi likh sakte ho
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Haan vhi baat to mere dimag m priority p rhti h ki self satisfaction k liye Umar pdi Hai ABI kuch future planning kr lun 😁😁
Baat RHI munafa ki to m phle risk Lene k liye tayyar Hun kuki khud p yakeen hona chahiye ek do month Ni ek sal Baad itna to mil jaye jisse m ek Saal ki hosting afford kr sku
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Precisely. So you have it down pat. Good. Now study 😝
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Abhi exam dekr Aya hu to isliye Abhi tym pass kr RHA hu 😀😀aise hi idhar udhar
Actually m exams m b Ni pdh pata continuously 2-3 hours
Aur agr gap mil jaye to smjho full holiday celebration hota Hai mera😁
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Farewell lover? I love that..and the last line is my favourite.
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Thanks Doll and good morning 🙂 😉
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That was dark, gritty but powerful. Spendid!
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Thanks a lot Vishal 😊
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Yaar, yeh kya surprise hai? Who is that error? Anyways… Excellent article… I mean that’s my error… “Poem”. 😂
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Chiradeep this is a piece of fiction, not based on reality at all. Please don’t be alarmed 🙂
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I know. If it would have been a reality you would have told me on my WhatsApp 😉
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No i wouldn’t 😝😝😝
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I know how to extract… Like your tooth…😉
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No you wouldn’t coz I wouldn’t have made a mistake like that in the first place
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Hahahahaha. I am kidding yaar. Don’t get so serious… Let me brush my teeth and come back… It’s late now… Then I need to discuss about Mega tomorrow… I am now in trouble.
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Okie dokie 😀
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