I have been trying to find a flaw in you.
I’ve been trying for ages it seems.
But I know now that the flaws will never manifest in you,
Because you are not true.
You’re in my head.
And that’s why you’re perfect.
Copyright ©2017 Pradita Kapahi.
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Oh heck yeah! The search goes on and you never find anyone. How’ve you been Lee?
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Just fine, Pradita. And you must be busy…haven’t seen you in a day or two.
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Yes I am. Daughter isn’t too well. Have been under the weather myself.
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Ah, I am sorry to hear it.
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Thanks 😊
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To the perfect you👌 lovelt
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Thanks Jen darling
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Perfect!
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Haha! Thanks 😊
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bahut badhiya……beautiful.
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Thanks a lot Sir 😊
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Nice one
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Thanks
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Welcome, How r u
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I’m good Daneel. How have you been?
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I am also fine Pradita
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Only in imaginations….👍
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True that. Only there…
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Well said. Often, we carry so much storms in our head and an illusion that never hurts:)
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Yes. But i it does make us more stupid 😉
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Ya!!! I know…we build unwanted stories in the head…lol it does make us stupid.
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😂 😂 😂
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Haha this is perfect!
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Thanks a lot Pragalbha 😊😊
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You are very welcome 🙂
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🙏😊
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Wow!! It’s all in the head. 😂. Beautifully written !!
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Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed it 😊
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This is amazing…. A perfect write up indeed… 🙂
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Thanks a lot Ashish
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My pleasure.. I have missed many of your posts… will try to cover as soon as possible… 🙂
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No issues at all. I especially ought not to mind when someone misses my posts because God knows I’m not regular with reading anyone else’s. So really, no issues at all 😀
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Oh, wow I loved the thought, the thought of being perfect and yet absent!
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Thanks Moushmi 🙂
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Whom are you talking about? If it’s about God, don’t stop searching Him. I have found Him and He sustains me… And if it’s about anyone else then it’s ok as you will know that person better than me…😉
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It’s not God and it’s not anyone else. It’s an idea in my head and that’s why he eludes me. Actually, this applies not only to me but to everyone else who seek perfection in people and compare them to the notions of a ‘perfect person’ in their heads. The notion of a perfect person does not exist in reality, but our minds, they don’t let us be.
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Absolutely! We all are mortal human being and can’t be perfected with our flesh and blood. Bodily sinful desires and urges always stamps our imperfections everywhere even we try to be perfect all the time.
Great poem.
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Thanks again Dada.
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